Is this good writing for a 14 year old?

Question by awkward.: Is this good writing for a 14 year old?
Is this good writing for a 14 year old? Would you read on? Any criticism is appreciated! The story is about suicide and this is an intro.

Most people assume that teenagers can’t comprehend any emotion beyond being horny, impulsive and/or lazy. From an adults’ corrupted point of view, they think that kids can’t suffer from depression or any other mental illness. They always say it’s just part of “being a teenager” as if they weren’t all there once, their feelings being dismissed because of adolescence. Although I find it annoying when girls claim to be depressed and prove it by making their status’ lyrics to some Taylor Swift song, not all of us are so pathetic.
This brings us to my life. I like to think of it as being on a see-saw with that kid who brings McDonald’s and Twinkies with him to the park every day. My life is that kid, and my body is on the other side. No control over what’s happening, I fly into the air, as he sinks into the sandbox.
The worst part of it is that I have to lie to ever one I care about and tell them that I’m fine. After all, it’s only helping them in the end. Who wants to listen to me whine about my problems? Well, apparently you do if you’re reading this… but that’s not the point. “I’m okay, really”, “I’m fine” and “don’t worry about it” are my three phrases to getting people to leave me alone. I’m not a secretive person; I’m as subtle as a gun when I’m angry, but if I’m feeling down, you wouldn’t get a reason why even if you shoved pins in my eyes. I could deal with a little acupuncture.
`If I already didn’t put a few insomniacs to sleep, I’m sure you’re all curious about why I’m this way. It’s not because I didn’t get the “purse I wanted” or because “he called my fat”…it’s much deeper than that. However, if I told you now there would be no story, correct? I’m not one for spoilers. If anyone is interested, I would encourage you to read on. If not, go pick up that sappy romance novel about a forbidden love-triangle between a dull human girl, a vampire who wears body glitter and a really hairy guy. Wait, is that supposed to be a werewolf?
This isn’t about me.

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CHINESE HERBS- NATURE’S BLESSINGS FOR AILING SOULS
Among the family of herbal Medicines the treatment that has inspired the human souls and has intricately woven into the social fabric of many generations globally are nonetheless Chinese Medicinal herbs. These herbs have not only benefited the ailing human beings but also have been the source of Information and studies for the people of scientific world of today. These Chinese Medicinal herbs found its birth last 3000 years back among the Zhou Dynasty. The recurrent troubles prevailing in the socio economic condition of the people led to their belief that sickness was due to the malevolent action of demonic forces. Incipient herbal medicine was employed to extirpate these unwanted intruders laying foundation of today’s Chinese healing herbs.
According to Chinese legend, Chinese father of agriculture and leader of an ancient clan, Shen Nung, tested one by one hundreds of different plants to discover their nutritional and medicinal properties and then on this tradition continued.
CHINESE HERBS
There are over 3000 different Chinese healing herbs that can be used for medical purposes. Only 300 to 500 of these herbs are commonly used.
BENEFITS OF CHINESE HERBAL MEDICINES
Chinese healing herbs performs three main functions:
•To treat the immediate problem, such as killing bacteria or a virus,
•To strengthen the body, helping it to recover, and
•To maintain health.

DISEASES CHINESE HERBS CURE
Chinese healing herbs are commonly used to treat disorders such as:
•Digestive problems
•Eczema and psoriasis
•Fatigue
•Gynaecological disorders
•Hepatic (liver) disorders
•Cardiovascular disorders
•Stress

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Will this “gay doctor” think I like him?

I work in a hospital setting and because of it I think I have every disease I come in contact with. The disease of the moment for me now is diabetes. I have been assured by my doctor that I do not have diabetes, but it is stuck in my head that I do. Long story short, I have anxiety and stress all the time. So, where I work there is someone that practices acupuncture. I have always been interested in whether or not acupunture would work for my anxiety/stress. My insurance does cover it at the place I want to go, my only problem is, and this may be silly, but I think the acupuncturist thinks I like him as more than a friend. We’re both guys, I’m gay, he may be gay, but I’m not sure. I really do not have feelings for him, but the way we talk to each other, he may think I do. I really want to try acupuncture, but I’m afraid he will think I’m only coming to him because I like him and want to be around him. I also think the people that work with him (the nurse, receptionist, etc.) would be thinking the same thing. I was going to write him on Facebook and start talking about it, but what should I say? I really want to try acupuncture, so how do I get over it and just do it?

I work in a hospital setting and because of it I think I have every disease I come in contact with. The disease of the moment for me now is diabetes. I have been assured by my doctor that I do not have diabetes, but it is stuck in my head that I do. Long story short, I have anxiety and stress all the time. So, where I work there is someone that practices acupuncture. I have always been interested in whether or not acupunture would work for my anxiety/stress. My insurance does cover it at the place I want to go, my only problem is, and this may be silly, but I think the acupuncturist thinks I like him as more than a friend. We’re both guys, I’m gay, he may be gay, but I’m not sure. I do sort of have a crush on him, but I want to go to help my anxiety not to “spend time” with him which is what I think he may be thinking. I really want to try acupuncture, but I’m afraid he will think I’m only coming to him because I like him and want to be around him. I also think the people that work with him (the nurse, receptionist, etc.) would be thinking the same thing. I was going to write him on Facebook and start talking about it, but what should I say? I really want to try acupuncture, so how do I get over it and just do it?

Will this guy think I have feelings for him?

I work in a hospital setting and because of it I think I have every disease I come in contact with. The disease of the moment for me now is diabetes. I have been assured by my doctor that I do not have diabetes, but it is stuck in my head that I do. Long story short, I have anxiety and stress all the time. So, where I work there is someone that practices acupuncture. I have always been interested in whether or not acupunture would work for my anxiety/stress. My insurance does cover it at the place I want to go, my only problem is, and this may be silly, but I think the acupuncturist thinks I like him as more than a friend. We’re both guys, I’m gay, he may be gay, but I’m not sure. I do sort of have a crush on him, but I want to go to help my anxiety not to “spend time” with him which is what I think he may be thinking. I really want to try acupuncture, but I’m afraid he will think I’m only coming to him because I like him and want to be around him. I also think the people that work with him (the nurse, receptionist, etc.) would be thinking the same thing. I was going to write him on Facebook and start talking about it, but what should I say? I really want to try acupuncture, so how do I get over it and just do it?

I was talking to a young man who knows all about body energy and I was asking why when I am depressed, why does my body just want to sleep. He said it was about the energy in my body. I have had acupuncture, but I know very little about Chi, so if I want to read about it so I can help myself with depression, what would I google ? thanks ;)

I have tried zoloft and paxil with extreme negative side effects including worsened anxiety, I’ve also been trying alternative therapies such as acupuncture and chinese herbs. They helped for a while but the attacks are back with a vengeance. Daily functioning has become hard. I’m curious about Lexapro and if anyone with the same probs may have benefited from it. Also, how long did it take to notice a difference? Please help :) Thanks

This is What Acupuncture Phoenix Has to Offer

Phoenix is the capital city of the U.S. state of Arizona and county seat of Maricopa County. There are many Acupuncture clinics situated in this most populous city of the Arizona state. Along with all these Acupuncture clinics, Phoenix Institute of herbal medicine and acupuncture is also prevalent in this city.

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Emotional Freedom Technique, or E.F.T. for short, is an emotional version of acupuncture without the needles, and it is performing miracles all over the world. It is based on a breakthrough in therapy which has provided relief from pain, diseases and emotional issues for thousands of people.


Based on the same principals of acupuncture, E.F.T. utilises the main meridian points on the body that are integral to the bodies subtle energy system to release physical, emotional, mental and spiritual imbalances. This energy system was discovered by the Chinese approximately 5,000 years ago and is referred to by various names including Chi, Ki, Prana, Life Force and Life Energy.

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Does acupuncture treat this?

I have anxiety and maybe phobia but im not sure if acupuncture would be ok for this? Has anyone tried it? Is it risky because insurance does not cover it. Oh and im scared of needles and always feel like im going to faint.

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